All Comments on 'Violent World of Vicky Brown'

I was just browsing and found this story. What a wonderful find. It has everything, mystery, action, romance. The only fault with it is that it is not longer. Keep writing, please.

It needs more dialog and less narration. You also should have dealt with the bodies left lying in the street. Even justifiable homicide has to be explained, and the fired rounds have to be accounted for. Even when it seems just, vigilantism is always wrong.

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<I>-- srgeek --</I>

Very impressive. Great job on outlining and identifying your characters. You didn’t waste time, efforts and words unnecessarily getting into the story line. Enjoyed the story very much. Yes, it could have lasted longer but I suspect it was just what you intended it to be. Top marks. Thank you.

Do long ago. Just ss good now as then. Hard to believe!