Very nicely written and illustrated.
I don't like the word "patting". Was "tapping" too common?
I like this a lot! Is ee rubbing off...erm... rubbing...erm...never mind! lol Thanks GF!
but for the record I adored Lennon loooong before I ever um adored ee. So there! :D
As skilled with words as you are with images, Ange - I love this picture [and poem]still very much John even with the manipulation.
he was my favorite beatle too, beautiful tribute
A time of free spirit ~ Beatle mania ~ left now to only reminisce - remembering a happier time. Only the undertone of sadness remains. The illustration, a misty reproduction of John Lennon's Rickenbacker Guitar. Ah...Memories...
Thoughts from a brief moment in time when Lennon and the boys stirred the world.
This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 36,000 poems.
you are magic with music...
jth : )
I agree that foot tapping would be better, but it's a five.
fill in the blank with your fav. TK U MLJ LV NV
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