by ckklover
Why do guys think it's so cool to write crap from the man's point of view of having stuff done to him. Do they really think that women are going to read this and get so excited and contact them for a real encounter? hahaha god these stories are lame. If your writing it to read yourself cause you can't get a gf, grow up lol
This is a story of great imagination and erotism. It was touching, indicating true love of man and wife. I especially liked the cumming in a condom during the handjob, and then she pours it in herself.
not bad at all. i like the part where you take your time to play with your wife instead of ramming her right away. what i didn't like is that you jump too quickly from one thing to another - no description, no epithets. you might want to work on that a bit. other than that, it's fine
my wife has made me cum in public at a fancy restaurant - such a thrilling experience!