All Comments on 'Friday Night Ch. 04'

I'd have been gone to play golf or fishing. She obviously is not going to let the poor fucker do anything except have a bad case of blue balls.

Teasing is one thing but this bitch has no intention of doing anything to this wimp dicked fucker but to get hers, and be damned with getting his nuts off. At least Peter didn't have her bringing in some long dicked lover to fuck her while he watched.

i'll be watching for the sequel to see if he ever does get a nut. with her last comment, I doubt it. Besides that, Very few married women like to fuck in the morning after the Chardonnay has worn off. Maybe she will take his cage off so he can jack-off.

Great story, well written and very sexy. I think this is the right category. For me, BDSM can be an either/or thing - it doesn't have to have B,D,S and M. Plenty of domination here, which is good enough fo rme. Keep it up !!(so to speak)

THERE PUSSY EVERYWHERE, WHY WOULD A MAN LET ANY WOMAN DO THAT TO HIM.

If you want a good ending have him pack his bags and be gone when she wakes up in the morning. She is one sick bitch, and he is to much of a wimp for you to give it a good ending.

He should fuck her in the morning as many times as he can. Then go visit the local sex shop to purchase a few things. After that, the shoe should go on the other foot. A few hours of him teasing her until she is almost ready to cum would put the right topping on this fun time. Then they could swap the teasing back and forth with eath other.

I did notice that there were no other men, no other women, no humiliation, no degredation in this story. Just a loving couple doing something they both agreed on.

I just hope that she doesn't threaten to stop the game over and over just to get her way. That was the only part that I didn't care for in the story.

Enough allready.

Your story is leaving me as frustrated as the character.

This poor husband is not getting anything from this agreement with his wife. I really need to see this relationship evened off.

Very good story, it has a lot of domanation in it. I have to admit the the poor hubby ask for this, but what a bitch she is being to the man she says she loves. I would want to get even with her it it was me which would make for a nice story also.

Great story, very well written, very creative. The fact that some readers are mad at the wife tells you what a great job you did at making the charachters seem real.

Some form of revenge is definiely in order. I really can't understand a LOVING wife doing that to her husband.

Maybe tying her down every night and reaming her ass?

Nightowl21

I TRY to judge each submission on it's merits. This isn't somehing I would want to do, but it is original, well written and erotic.

I haven't seen anything which would really make him a wimp...a little sick maybe. :-)

Actually i am looking forward to the next chapter. good job!

Move it to FETISH - The BSDM folks are offended by this demented science fiction nonsense.

The author is talented but doesn't have a clue as to what is believeably entertaining and sensual, his woman is calculatingly cruel beyond belief - his braindead pitiful demeaned husband isn't close to credible - this is a sick dark comedy of pitiful disrespect from an author who could write entertaining and sensual themes but is more than a bit sick himself - arncha!!! seems sad - a shame - but write for the sickies if thats what you want - but please put it in FETISH

One big question, when is she going to pull out a dildo or use her finger to massage his prostate glan, short anything else the must be very rich to lay around the house all day. It is not mentioned if is the weekend or are the on leave from work. How could go to work and be like that all day. That must be the all saying, "I got him by the balls"

Very high frustration level, but that adds a great deal of tension making the sex very hot.

Sexual frustration may be what he really likes (and she really likes creating), but I was disturbed by the trust issues. It would seem that he would be reluctant to repeat this given the lack of honesty she has exhibited. Examples: 11 is really 10 (and don't challenge it).

Morning lasts until 11:59, despite the clear implication it was until they arose in the morning.

And, "if you agree to wait until morning, we'll do this often", but the next evening, it was "if you want to come now, no sex for a week and we won't repeat this weekend for a long time."

From the tone of several comments on this submission, it is obvious that many readers may not understand the mentality of the male character, let alone the author. I totally GET this story, and it is very hot. What many commenters don't seem to understand is that the MALE author is writing for a male character, fantasies that are HIS! The woman is not a bitch, she is feeding HIS fantasies! I for one would love, love, LOVE(!!!) this scenario and could only be so lucky as to have a woman in my life who got so turned on by acting this out. The fantasy is to be teased and denied by a woman -- not because she is trying to help her man live out his fantasy -- but because SHE craves the tease and it makes her soaking wet to do it as much as HE craves being teased! So hot!

Peter, more of the same! I loved it!

When reading this type of story it leaves me a little flat. I'm not into denial, maybe a little tease, but not to this extent. So I try to be fair and see if the story holds together on it's own even though the overall story is unsatisfying to me. In general it does and therefore is a good story.<br><br>

However, these people seem to have a good relationship and a healthy sex life. The wife finds out her has a few fantasies, fairly extreme compared to what they usually do, and she just jumps into it, essentially twisting his arm and implying she is going to mad at him unless he agrees. This is coercion and is inconsistent with with love. If she was interested in filling his extreme fantasy she should have discussed it with him and let him participate in the planning. This would have been the "loving" thing to do. No love in her approach. Just feminine domination. Do it now, do it my way, if you don't there will be hell to pay, you are pathetic because you have such fantasies and I'm going to make you pay for it, blah, blah, blah. <br><br>

In the end, he agrees and they make it through in a manner satisfactory to both of them. I suspect that the vast majority of men would not have been as OK with it. She took a HUGE risk and it paid off. I wonder if she understood that or she was just being a bitch and didn't care. Even her last play: they had finished well, both happy and she turns to threats of denying them something they both enjoyed, i.e. never to be repeated, if he didn't go along with waiting until morning. More femdom. OK for him apparently but not loving. I wonder what her reaction would have been if when released in the morning he packed a bag and left. Would she be surprised? Upset? I think most men would have done exactly that. Overall not as bad as some other femdom stories. The overall writing was good.

Excellent stories!!!!

THANKS for all of them!

You are a FANTASTIC writer!

Thank you again

5 *s again

very good story, loved the whole series and can't wait for the next day

Have you considered putting this series in the Consensual Non-Consent category? I like the series. You did a great job. I wish porn was made with scripts like this. I'd love to see Channel Preston cast as his wife.