All Comments on 'The Forbidden Wish'

Pretty much a boy's fantasy, although one that most boys would prefer to happen at 14 and not 19. In fact I got the impression that Mike and Tommy were younger than their "official" Literoticia ages. <g>

and there is nothing wrong with that if it's well done.

Thank you both for your comments on my story. I hope you enjoyed it enough to take a moment to peek at some of my other work as well.

The boy was of age, of course. I always follow the rules of Literotica.

Thank you,

Misty/Sensuous Storyteller

So right about the 14-15 age range. That's when boys need sexy older women to seduce them!

I guess I'd have liked one or the other to be little more reluctant, overcome only by lust and or alcohol.

Of course my personal preference would be to have her get pregnant as a result

Thanks for drawing my attention to this.

This is one of my wildest fantasies, to be admired by and then have a young man fill me up and make me cum so hard !!!!

KATIE in NEW JERSEY

imagining tommy eating my wet pussy had me cumming with my fingers so hard 3 times, and i tasted so sweet.

****HOT read and a great fantasy had by many. Good storytelling. Thanks for sharing.

Super hot fantasy tale!