by The Mutt
...Longfellow's nephew, (or the mutt has cannabis seeds in his dogdish again).
It made me grin.
Visual, passionate and warm! I could feel the heart beat of the dragon as the drama unfolded!
credit where credit is due. I normally don't like the long lines and clear rhymes, but this one worked for me. It didn't sound forced and I have to admire the work put into it. Nice job!
If I could see the screen to type clearer I would :(
That was so gorgeous Mutt, thank you!!!!!!!!
Oh my god I can't stop crying, thank you hon. I wish I'd told you that he and I have broken up before you wrote this. I'll take it to the grave, thank you.
If only he'd read this now,.... whatever, thank you Mutt. I love you. You are such a fantastic friend, you have no idea how much this means to me.
Okay, grabbing the tissues now ;)
"If only he'd read this now,.... whatever, thank you Mutt"
I wish I didn't cry everytime I read this, so I could read your words clearer LOL
I can't see to type, so will leave it at that, thank you hon.
xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxx
I totally love this, Mutt! I can't wait for the kids to get home and read this to them! Thanks!
it made me cry too!! this is tender and fierce poetry Mutt..thank you :)
I absolutley loved this, what a wonderful read, thank you.
That was the first poem I've read on this site, and I hope they are all as good!
That was so beautiful. I'm crying too.
Followed the link in Doormouse's sig to the story. It wasn't until about halfway through that I realized it was a poem. :rolleyes:
Excellent work, excellent story line.
Mutt, what can I say, but well done! I'm not much of a writer, and even less of a poet. So, I don't read a lot in the poetry section here, but this is really some very cool stuff. You should be proud.
This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 38,000 poems.
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