All Comments on 'Dragon Princess'

by The Mutt

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jd4georgejd4georgeover 19 years ago
Methinks thee be...

...Longfellow's nephew, (or the mutt has cannabis seeds in his dogdish again).

It made me grin.

StringarStringarover 19 years ago
Beautiful Poem!

Visual, passionate and warm! I could feel the heart beat of the dragon as the drama unfolded!

lostandfounderlostandfounderover 19 years ago
Allright,

credit where credit is due. I normally don't like the long lines and clear rhymes, but this one worked for me. It didn't sound forced and I have to admire the work put into it. Nice job!

doormousedoormouseover 19 years ago
OMG

If I could see the screen to type clearer I would :(

That was so gorgeous Mutt, thank you!!!!!!!!

Oh my god I can't stop crying, thank you hon. I wish I'd told you that he and I have broken up before you wrote this. I'll take it to the grave, thank you.

If only he'd read this now,.... whatever, thank you Mutt. I love you. You are such a fantastic friend, you have no idea how much this means to me.

Okay, grabbing the tissues now ;)

yuiyuiover 19 years ago
Epic Poetry

Outstanding - wonderful story *and* beautiful imagery!

doormousedoormouseover 19 years ago
I meant the whatever

"If only he'd read this now,.... whatever, thank you Mutt"

I wish I didn't cry everytime I read this, so I could read your words clearer LOL

I can't see to type, so will leave it at that, thank you hon.

xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxx

BooMerengueBooMerengueover 19 years ago
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I totally love this, Mutt! I can't wait for the kids to get home and read this to them! Thanks!

normal jeannormal jeanover 19 years ago
oh gosh!

it made me cry too!! this is tender and fierce poetry Mutt..thank you :)

ABSTRUSEABSTRUSEover 19 years ago
A classic in my book.

I absolutley loved this, what a wonderful read, thank you.

RebeccaLeahRebeccaLeahover 19 years ago
beautiful

just beautiful.

Angel Of DesireAngel Of Desireover 19 years ago
OH wow

That was the first poem I've read on this site, and I hope they are all as good!

That was so beautiful. I'm crying too.

JRavenJRavenover 19 years ago
Outstanding bit of wordsmithing!

Followed the link in Doormouse's sig to the story. It wasn't until about halfway through that I realized it was a poem. :rolleyes:

Excellent work, excellent story line.

wolf182wolf182over 19 years ago
freakin' awesome

Mutt, what can I say, but well done! I'm not much of a writer, and even less of a poet. So, I don't read a lot in the poetry section here, but this is really some very cool stuff. You should be proud.

LeBrozLeBrozover 16 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 38,000 poems.

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

Stunning. You have true talent. Pursue it.

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