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by z00time09/27/04

Just another wimp story.

Peter...
I am disapointed in this sequel, therefore, the entire series.
This just portrays another pussy wipped man thinking with his prick.
I realize that this is in another category from which it started. I probably would not have read the last 2 chapters of this series if we had not corresponded directly because I really don't like seeing men dominated like this, but I guess to each, their own.

I think that you might really be a frustrated, dominated woman seeking revenge for some poor treatment by men of your past.

Disapointed in the USA

z00time

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by Anonymous09/27/04

Makes you feel like

Lisa is a controlling manipulative bitch,instead of the "loving wife". She really hates her husband in a perverted sort of way.

I have seen some sex play of this type in my lifetime, but this bitch carries it to extreme. As she seemed to enjoy the sex for a time, it was always in the back of her mind to "get even" so to speak.

I'd have jacked off Sunday morning, and wiped my cock on the bedroom curtains. At least I'd have had the satisfaction of knowing that the bitch hadn't manipulated me with her cunt, and her domineering attitude.

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by sherlock4009/27/04

I think the husband should get his turn.

Tieing her down and teasing her until she will agree with anything that he wants. Sharing the teasing and the fun would make this a more loving story.
By the way, is she a lawyer? She bargains more than a back alley trader. Since the husband only has enough blood to run one of his heads, it seems that he shouldn't batgain unless he is teasing her at the same time.
I would like to point out to the serious naysayers that they did not involve anyone else, there was no pain, humiliation or degradation involved in their play and they are both in love with each other.

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by Anonymous10/15/04

Revenge

I said before--I'd tie HER down every night, ream her ass, and untie her just before I left for work. She might like that.TIC I doubt it but it would fit her.

Course, I'd find another pussy for the week.


Nightowl21

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by Nightowl2211/28/04

Love? Sherlock.

I didn't see any love. Just torture. Loving wives do NOT treat a husband like that. She is just a controlling bitch. HE should move on!

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by Sxymobbw12/18/04

Great sequel

I think this is a great continuation to the Friday night stories. I know some of the comments felt she was 'torturing him, etc, but they both just seem to enjoy this type of teasing and release to me. I think it just makes for some great hot sex after. Another good one Peter.

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by Sxymobbw12/18/04

Great sequel

I think this is a great continuation to the Friday night stories. I know some of the comments felt she was 'torturing him, etc, but they both just seem to enjoy this type of teasing and release to me. I think it just makes for some great hot sex after. Another good one Peter.

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by Anonymous01/01/05

Good one

Thanks for that submission. It was an enjoyable and refreshing change from many of the teasing and denial stories that end up with a person never ever getting to cum. Look forward to seeing more stories about this couple.

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by fakers5101/25/05

Teasing was great

I loved it and I am glad he took the chance to cum then, because anything could have happen within the next 7 days. The old saying< "The best laid plans are sometimes led astray" My thinking is that during the next 7 days she is going to fuck his ass.
J

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by fakers5101/25/05

Teasing was great

I loved it and I am glad he took the chance to cum then, because anything could have happen within the next 7 days. The old saying< "The best laid plans are sometimes led astray" My thinking is that during the next 7 days she is going to fuck his ass.
J

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by Anonymous03/09/05

fridaynight and next day

I totally enjoyed this saga, in fact, I finally got up the nerve to let my wife read this, at first she didn't want to but I managed to talk her into it and once she had finished reading the complete story, she just turned to me, and with a grin I had never seen in the six and 1/2 years we have been married, told me to just see what is in store for TONIGHT!

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by Anonymous09/21/05

This mean manipulative bitch

I'd rather use a blow-up doll or jack off to an old porn movie as to play this domineering bitch's game. If a man had to fight like this poor schmuck to get his nuts off, he'd be better off single and fucking farm animals.

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by jasonnh07/26/09

Her promises worth nothing

Her promises are worth nothing. She promised him anal sex and now she threatens revenge for it. More manipulations, not love. More teasing although she said she wouldn't. He was supposed to be able to cum as much as he wanted, no extra conditions, and again she is teasing and manipulating by adding conditions. These kind of games are based on a very deep trust of your partner and she has violated his trust over and over trying to prove how clever she is. In the last story she cheated when he was supposed to have 10 penetrations and she denied it was ten and went for 11. Now this isn't a game to be played from time to time but for him doing so well over the 24 hours she is going to deny him for another 7 days. The dominant is allowed to be dominant by the submissive. That allowance is granted because of trust. Trust is earned and boundaries are tested slowly and respectfully. Lisa just schemes how she can abuse her husband and it is escalating. How long before she really does cross the line? She won't see it coming because she isn't concerned about his welfare, only her own. At least it's in a better category, BDSM, but BDSM has it's rules to play by. Lisa doesn't.

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by Anonymous01/01/12

Just a selfish manipulative bitch

Shot her and be done with it
She wont be happy until he is castrated and dead.
Next week will be nigger week she will have him service 3 to 6 big black cocks every night. At the end of it they will rip, not cut, his balls off. She will be so happy as he bleeds to death.

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by Anonymous03/19/14

mendacity as a method

that's how this story (and almost all BDSM stories) is working...

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