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Tathagataover 19 years agoI like
the simplicity of this..although I'd like a little more " meat" on it.
It does convey a nice picture/ feeling of sadness and resignation.
sandspikeover 19 years agoI agree w/ Tath.
This work has PO but is lacking something. Quit sandbagging
and give us all your thoughts. Good start.
Liarover 19 years agoYou have been reviewed
This poem is mentioned in the New Poems thread on the forum.
Chagrinedover 19 years agoI like it. Forget the neanderthals.
The only change I could think of was to use the phrase:
Nothing but blackness, or Nothing
Blackness
and change it to
Nothing but blackness, or Blackest Nothing.
But hey, what do I know?
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