All Comments on 'A Midnight Train'

That was hot! Omg...I loved it.

That was an incredibly hot story! Keep 'em cumming.

that was one hell of a hot story! keep up the good work!

Would have adjusted the ending, sank in a seat rather than fell down in a puddle of cum. Really enjoyed the story, great job!

Hey have a part 2 - fucking her in the train again but have a better ending ...

nice i came in my pants

To quote several others, let me just say "wow". Excellent story. Hope to read others. ^^

1 Correction to make in this story, Baseball games don't have double overtime, they have extra innings. I think Basketball is the one with double overtime.

You would think a mom with 5 kids who have played baseball would remember that it is extra innings, oh well...I was caught up in my own story having just watched a re-run of Risky Business...(I just love the train scene in that flick)

Thank you for your feedback, I'll check my facts more clearly next time...

the Nitegazer

it was good, but the 5" heels and no panties are kind of silly. a more normal attire would have ben cool. He could have slide her panties to the side. or forced her to drop them around her ankles. that would add to the reluctance.

very erotic. love the idea of not knowin who made her feel so good. a GREAT story! keep it up!

Nitegazer knows what we want—sex. But the real beauty of her writing lies in the lines of her stories and her realistic nuances. I am a pilot and “The Flying Lesson” was dead on.

From “A Midnight Train” these aspects made me feel like I was there:

1.) Her 5’2’ frame was summarily surrounded by a wall of drunken baseball fans.

2.) The 5” heels she wore at a train station

3.) She stood there, hanging from the strap. UK or French trains anyone?

I sure like this broad and only a special woman such as Nitegazer merit it being used in a positive way. She knew instantly. I basically run an ad agency. NITEGAZER—more, more. We will put it in galley format just to see it in its full glory!

HERE IS MY FORWARD FOR YOU: The book you are about to read was written by a real human female.

Exciting story. Hope things are working out for you i.e. your bio

Very well done, I 'm making a copy for my girlfriend, she'll love it. Hopefully it will inspire an adventure into the city.

...that I always manage to catch the wrong train. Dang

That short little snippet is the hottest thing I've read in a long time. mysterious, compelling, and it got me soaking wet. I only wear skirts and I never wear panties- this is a particular fantasy of mine. mmm.

That story was great!!!!!

i wish that i would find a woman like that on the train

I would love something like this to happen to me for real. ;)

I just started enjoying it and it finished. :3

It got my hear pounding and my cock hard very enjoyable story

Have enjoyed it more if it was longer and had more than one man have her and also had the remove that little dress so everyone could see her naked body getting fucked.

Try this for your next train story

thanks mate, I like reading your story

You have a lot of great descriptions. Super sexy, man

good but too short!!!