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by pierre430504/14/05

Poetry in Motion.

DearestEllie,
You certainly have a flair for the Erotic. Keep me, that is,it up.

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by Anonymous07/13/11

Wonderful!

Truly well done. Marvelous. Thanks for sharing that.

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by inQbus10/26/12

Beautiful

Your poem is the most sensual description of passionate lovemaking that I have ever read. Such a vivid imagery ... . Your words makes it seems like a deeply spiritual experience. I envy you.

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