All Comments on 'Learning to Like Gym'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
ITS A GOOD ONE

This is one of the best Gay Male submissions I have read to date. However it does need more detail and I hope there is a second one to cum. Keep Up the good Work

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
loved it!

A part 2 would be very appreciated!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
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ladyambarladyambarover 18 years ago
Someone turn on the fan, please...

Definitely loved this one. Woo! All wet & bothered. Thank you! A second installment would be greatly appreciated.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
GOOD.. COULD BE BETTER

WOW a good story, BUT, needs more detail, more detail and a to be longer, hope u write a follow up soon, with this in mind, i still loved it, just instead of good could be AMAZING

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Part 2 please!

More details would be nice

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
omg!

this is one of the best stories i have ever read. if it were longer and a bit more descriptive i would have popped just reading it!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
surreality

The plot was funny, because it was so surreal - like a porn flick. It could've used a few more gooey details

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Awesome cum-story

A bit cliche but still hot.. there are some straight guys in every school.. it wouldve been better if maybe the main character fell in mud and had a longer shower.. then josh had come into find him cuz he hadnt seen him and then coach came in and startd the whole intermate suck off scene

jjafriendjjafriendalmost 13 years ago
hot premise

Some of the spelling mistakes were distracting, but I loved how it kept building and didn't dally on extraneous stuff.

liz33ndliz33ndover 9 years ago
pretty good read

it does need more detail, and a part two... .. the coach take him on day one is hard to believe.. maybe on the second gym class.. just letting the new guy know what he had to look forward too...

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Yay because child molesting rapists are fun

Seriously this is sick shit. If this gets you off you are a horrible person.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Gym class

Gym class can be such a hot place...all those hard masculine bodies. Josh seems a really good guy that Nick could connect with. Maybe the mature and muscular Josh could have a bit of a hairy chest, and love Nick and Nick could love him in return.

Always enjoyed looking at the masculine and muscular bodies in gym class -- some with hairy chests and abs, some without. Cocks of all sizes and development. Some sizable pubic bushes, others sparsely haired. But I did find some great sexy blowjob partners in my two years of gym classes!

Tosspot1Tosspot1about 1 year ago

I hope you were as hard as me when you wrote that

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