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Confronting His Lies Ch. 01

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by amasterfound10/29/04

GREAT!

I loved it, but then I did help write it! Hope part two gets up soon!

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by Anonymous10/30/04

please

don't switch tenses in the middle.

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by SEVERUSMAX11/04/04

Sorry re that...

...caught most of the present-tense verbs, and thought I had edited all of them out, but those were an oversight on my part. Otherwise, though, you have to admit it's a good story.

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