by happypsycho
How old are you? Honestly. because this reads like the wank fantasy of a 14 year old. Not good, or hot, or involving, must try harder. 3/10
Definitely one of my more favorite incest fics on this site. Really deserving of a follow-up!
A second part and perhaps a third will help with character development and don't be afraid of a rewrite of the first part. a good story can be improved.
I liked the story it was enjoyable and decently written with a clear plot and fluid transitions.