All Comments on 'Lovely Siblings'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
BZL

randi ke bache

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
well written

very arousing,greatly written. do a second part.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Unrealistic

How old are you? Honestly. because this reads like the wank fantasy of a 14 year old. Not good, or hot, or involving, must try harder. 3/10

PrimalDesirePrimalDesirealmost 10 years ago
Freakin' hot!

Definitely one of my more favorite incest fics on this site. Really deserving of a follow-up!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

what a 25 yr old sister was doing at her parents.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
good story

A second part and perhaps a third will help with character development and don't be afraid of a rewrite of the first part. a good story can be improved.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

I liked the story it was enjoyable and decently written with a clear plot and fluid transitions.

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Location: Los Angeles Love to write. Stories on this site are my first attempts at erotica. I'm actually not as perverted as you'd think. :)