All Comments on 'Caressing the Veil'

A very sweet romantic tale of Samhain magick!

Logophile strikes again. A true knack for creating visual images through writing. My wife was caught between tears and arousal! Great Story!!! brianandbrooke@sls

I enjoyed reading your story as it was lovingly written. And just that necessary touch of realism.

Good luck.

What an amazing story! It's not very often I get teary reading erotica!

First-rate job, Logophile. A well written heart-tugger. If this was in Romance or Erotic Couplings it would pull a very high score. Keep up the good work.

Rumple

What a lovely piece of writing!! I was very moved. a wonderful Samhain experience

A first-rate submission, very moving. Good luck!

You've managed to paint another story that is so vivid and clear that its almost like being there!

Its hot, erotic, passionate and so much more. The storyline is cool too. I hope she gets a yearly visit even if its only in her mind.

-lv

Not a word wasted! Bravo! (and good luck!!)

I enjoyed your story very much.

awwwww That was wonderful!

Beautifully written and I agree with the comment below - Not a word wasted!

I am, it seems, a touchy feely sort today, not only was your story arousing it brought a tear to my eye.

Well Done!

Catie/emerald

How could I have missed this the first time? You are astonishingly gifted! Sack, sobbing quietly

logophile, I am an immediate fan, after this one! What a combination of sensuality and pathos! I, too, almost cried, and we men don't DO THAT, especially with a hard-on! Keep up the good work...I'll continue reading!

That was very well written, it really felt as if it were something you had experienced. You conveyed the emotions so well, romantic and very erotic.

This is the first that I have read of yours and I thoroughly enjoyed it. Would that it could really happen... but what if it can...? ~Minx

unveils many emotions throughout. Very arousing and touching at the same time.

Logo that was beautiful.. Such a bittersweet story. Loved it. Thank you. but please take your pic off your bio.

this made my eyes well up a little :')