All Comments on 'Nunsense'

Absolutely loved the little twist at the end! Another winner, Colly!

Colleen,

Great job on this story - I hope you win the contest.

I like the way you ended with the consensual premise.

As a guy who frequently felt the sting of the pointer, ruler, or belt from the holy sisters, I've always harbored a few nun fantasies of my own. :-)

Thanks for the arousing late night reading.

Jerry

Okay this made my day..."And you fucked up my ass! Everyone at the party is going to think I'm trying to carry a corn cob without using my hands!" Theresa replied through a hail of giggles.

I am under a hail of laughter myself, I enjoyed your tale. I'm not sure what the other comment means but the two Halloween contest stories by Colly have been excellent, thanks for the erotic story. Art~

Okay this made my day..."And you fucked up my ass! Everyone at the party is going to think I'm trying to carry a corn cob without using my hands!" Theresa replied through a hail of giggles.

I am under a hail of laughter myself, I enjoyed your tale. I'm not sure what the other comment means but the two Halloween contest stories by Colly have been excellent, thanks for the erotic story. Art~

MET is right. That's a great line. :D

Great story, too.

Great story, Colly -- but I got all that info for you and you didn't even use it??? LOL ;)

Honey

I LOVE it!!! Wonderfully writen to keep the reader from knowing too much too soon. A new twist on your talent sweetie, it's great.

but it was a fun read anyway and I enjoyed it.

A four foot, nine inch pseudo nun; that makes Sally Field seem like Goliath. Great read. But did you and Og collaborate on nun stories?

Rumple Foreskin

I enjoyed this one.

I had nothing to do with it. Colleen is quite capable of writing her own stories and this is a good one.

Nuns are good Halloween fare along with devils, ghosts and scary monsters. This was a nice twist away from the usual nun story.

As always Colly-great job! *now do I post this twice like My Erotic Tail* :D

A believable tale of non-consent and a wonderful twist to ... um ... "end" it.

Holy crap, that was awesome. Didn't have a clue what was coming....awesome as always lil bit! PC

I like the use of detail in your writing, especially in the first couple of paragraphs to delineate the loneliness of the room. Absolutely masterful!! You may find my contest entry Who killed Lois Laynes? to be of interest...it should be posted in the next few days and may be Literotica's first murder mystery!

I didn't see that coming. What a great read! Good luck!

I sometimes wonder why I bother entering these contests, doomed to mid-table mediocrity as I usually am. You'll give me some one to look up to :)

I really enjoyed this, Colly, a real fun read. I'm not really into non-consent but I do like role-playing non-consent.

Really liked the idea of the story, especially the way it all works out in the end. Enjoyed it greatly. Best of luck in the contest.

I should make my catholic wife read this. She would be scandalized, probably. I thought the plot setup was wonderful. You did a great job of turning "non-consent" story into something loving and emotionally believable.

From moody to firm, definitely hot, literate and tight. Great tale.

SN

Love the role play of being in control of somone you are not supposed to be. Nice

I suspected what was going on well before the revelation, but very well told.

Very amusing. Thank You.

Get a fucking life. I don't know how you read this into hate. You're the STUPID BIGOT!

Thank you for a wonderful story, I enjoyed it very much ;)

Also, that anonymous comment about islam is ridiculous...did they even read the story!?

POV; you're looking for the comment that talks about "Islam" and " Stupid Bigots"

Great story, noncon that you don't know is CNC and has a wholesome ending so it doesn't leave you feeling weird when the post-clarity hits