All Comments on 'After-Class, After-Life Affair'

Good story, well cast, well paced, and spooky ending indeed

Your to hard on your self Rumple, great tale~ Good Luck and (*_*) Happy Halloween

Don't be so pessimistic! This was a great ghost story! Very sexy and extremely hot! good luck on the contest and keep writing!

I loved it! Hot story and a very nice twist at the end.

Un-fucking-real. LOL

I was confused as to why this was a halloween story...until the very end! Loved it, rumpy... ya made me smile huge. great job!

*hugs*

v~

Very hot and a great ending. No bottom of the barrel for you this time. Good luck!

Well, this may be my favorite of the Halloween entries so far. I enjoyed it greatly and loved the twist at the end. Of course, I'm a busy body and am dying to know more... Nice job leaving me a little hungry!

great pacing, flow and character development. Was humbled to give it a "5". Hope you win!

I could've SWORN I left a PC on this story already ... but perhaps I was dreaming. Very nice work, RF. Hot fuck and nice twist at the end. Good luck!

This was a very sexy story and I liked the spooky switch at the end. A good read.

A things-who-go-hump-in-the-night, story!

Kudos, RF!

I loved the twist. Great story Rumple Foreskin...great story.