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by WickedEve10/12/04

good poem

The last lines: "wanting to record a moment soon gone-" are really the most interesting. I like the way you wrapped this one up.

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by flyguy6910/14/04

feels real

Breaks from cliche by capturing a real moment. In this poem you have stepped away from the more predictable path of your other new offering. Well done, bourbonslut.

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