and spoken with the naturalness of remembering. I loved my grandpa too, and your poem made me feel good. Even though you've lost him, you haven't because of these beautifully expressed memories.
Wow, you were so right.. our poems are a lil mirror of each other, almost... This poem is soo wonderful. Heartfelt yes..I can see all the love..You did a fantastic job teeling your story, and the flow was great...Keep them coming.. Loved this~~!!! Very Special..
A moving tribute
That's best read ~
No comment can do it justice.
This exquisite poem brings everything back ~ one memory at a time. Beautiful images reveal the Seasons of the Heart. A Grandfather is a lovesome thing to be cherished forever.
they live forever in eternity of theirs, TK U MLJ LV NV
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