Soft and quiet. A very good sonnet. Just once I want to hear you talk very dirty though.:)
I love the image "slurp of murmur". I did stop at "season of discontent", and furrowed my brow... but quickly moved on when I chalked it up as homage to Shakespeare's winter.
in everything you say and do. Your poetry never ceases to amaze me, to enthrall me, to take me places I never thought a poem could take me. Beautiful work, S.
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