All Comments on 'Fun With Sylvia'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Get the names straight

Story would be ok if you could decide if her name was Karen or Sylvia... going back and forth is annoying.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Character confusion

Ummm...In just the first few paragraphs, we keep getting Karen and Sylvia referring to the same person...which is it?

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