All Comments on 'Janice'

..they got to the ANAL part

Very sensual. I personally have been with 3 shemales and your description brings back some good memories. A real turn on.

Very nice story with an overriding theme of emotional attachment punctuated by good sex. thanks

Kind of reminds me of some of mine. Only it was a little hard to read in some spots. I am not an English major by far, but you can't have quoted lines by two different people in the same paragraph. The story was wonderful though. I have to read more of them.

sweet and sexy, nicely written

This is a beautiful story. Judge not! It is reminiscent of a love story , yet unended. Will Jakey allow himself to accept anal as well or will he remain orally active with her. It leaves a lot of open possibilities to this story. When you accept a person for whom they are, will you remain a true friend or back away when their innermost secrets are revealed? Thanks for your story. I enjoyed reading it!

vey poorly formatted dialogue. remember, whenever characters take turns speaking then you need to start a new paragraph every time. reformat the story and it will be a lot more readable