by patricia51
What a nice refreshing, witty and very sexy story. I loved it. Well done Patricia.
I’m looking forward to the next chapter.
I’m not so sure about that Robert fellow though…lol
Liked the chapter and the theme.
I hope th echapters will follow regularly?
I really dislike stories I can't read through straight off. maybe I will wait till it's finished then read the lot.
BTW I suppose Ggain means Again?
It combined so many things that really made me love this first chapter, Patti.
The sudden unexpected confrontation with her being a vampire.
Yummy sex.
She has a job to do and I bet she suckceeds.
Humour and wit.
Plus your own wonderful way of writing.
Get a move on with the next one and don't hang about.
as always. I'm just sorry I didn't get to this sooner. Now I'm going to read all four episodes at once, and have a wonderful time doing it.
As always darling, sexy, humorous, witty. And so very easy to read. Mat xxxx
Terrific story, darlin'. I loved the surprise when she revealed herself to be a vampire. The twists on the traditional myths are great! I can't wait to keep reading.
I love your stories, and this one seems to be no exception. May you live to write forever. Thanks, Patti.
mismused
I hope you have plans to continue in this vein (no pun intended!)
I think you're on to something here. I'd like to hear more about how vampires "really" are--you give the myth more credibility by updating them like this.
I would like the sex to be more lusty and depraved, though, but that could just be me...
Radagast
You've created the character and the world she lives in so completely and concisely.
Very good work
and loved it. Without properly checking the dates written i had started reading the "other" bridget storys first then in mentioning to you about dates i thought...best look to see if there was something written before that i should be reading first and low and behold...here it was right in plan sight...what a ninny i am heh...however i will continue here and read on following the dates now duh!! some may call me a loon but i do believe that vampires do stir among us even in this day and time and i do believe that many lives can be lead with rebirths although i'm not a vampire i do have these feelings about stuff i've done before and know i haven't in "this" lifetime...so whos to say that there really isn't life after death of course this is only speculation*smile* Thank you for sharing. respectfully a fan
by itself does not further the story. Should be combined with another installment. Still reads well. I liked it.
Great beginning, although a little short. It's good to get to know Bridget and how she works and looks at life.