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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous10/18/04

cute

that was really cute

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by LilDarlin10/18/04

Love your Toy

Thought this was great, would love to have the toy in the imagination, but the real thing as you say is so much better. Keep up the good work. I loved it.

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by My Erotic Tail10/18/04

Walking stick?

have you seen the new "Walking Tall?"...he he he
great poem by the way...captivating~

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by Anonymous10/20/04

when you finish

when you finish with your toy will you let me know. would love to borrow it. great poem, what a way with words

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by Anonymous10/20/04

looking for that toy

i think all women are looking for that toy, when you get it ready you will make a million. excellent style with words

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by hot-one10/20/04

i agree

i agree the real thing is always better than the toy, even better, let the real thing use the toy on you. great poem, loved the ending

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by hotguy24210/20/04

i offer

i offer to be the real thing and will help you invent your toy

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by look4luv10/20/04

lol

good way with words. loved this poem

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by truthsword3810/20/04

looking

ok now i'm going thru looking just for your poems only. you have me going. great work

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by erotic4luv10/23/04

loved it

this is awesome. excellent poem

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