by Lady Lay
Good description, plot, and delineation of characters. Interesting twist toward the end. Your writing is very clear and lacks the "forced" cleverness of other writers. Bravo!
Great story! A great reminder to love the time we have and the people we really care about in our lives. We have such a short time and often forget to tell them often how much we care about them until they are gone! Then it is to late!
thank you well written. captured the sorrow and loss of one who has lost a love one in the service of our country. Marines, they watch over their own.