All Comments on 'Texas Red'

by Lady Lay

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
loved it

I loved this story. It's original and full of rich images that are easy to mentally picture and enjoy. A great short work of fiction!

DeD

Boxlicker101Boxlicker101over 19 years ago
Interesting

This was an interesting story and I didn't quite know what to make of it. It could use some editing, though.

My Erotic TailMy Erotic Tailover 19 years ago
Lady Lay your tale on me...

Wonderful story, HECK of a good tale, ballad, lore and or literary Art~ Good Luck and (*_*) Happy Halloween.

sacksackover 19 years ago
That was an easy "5".

I wish it was this easy to vote on all the entries. Short and extremely intriguing, even without direct sexual references. Hardly a stroke story, just clear, colorful, entertaining writing. Might I encourage you to try a more extended story next time??

Black TulipBlack Tulipover 19 years ago
Revenge

Revenge is a powerful emotion and your story was a nice example. I enjoyed reading it, but I would have been just as happy with a bit more. LOL

Good luck.

hebert100hebert100almost 11 years ago
unusual

unusual tale. a good tale of retribution. I wonder why you quit writing?

chytownchytownover 8 years ago
BOO!!!!!!!!*****

Cute fun read!! Thanks for sharing.

26thNC26thNCover 5 years ago
Whoa

Shades of "Ghost Riders in the Sky". Good yarn.

26thNC26thNCover 4 years ago
Like this one

Not really loving wives , but I really enjoyed it

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