All Comments on 'Whatever Your Heart Desires Ch. 01'

by AngelCherysse

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Great Start

Please! More of this storyline. Well developed up front, but now I want to see where this is heading. Thanks!

tgirl4utgirl4uover 19 years ago
Thank you

Thank you for this story. I loved it. It is good reading a transformation story where there is something positive for both parties. The story is well written. Keep it coming sister.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Totally agree

Great to see a story of this type without humiliation or the guy being forced. Please continue!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Keep it moving

Love it... especially the lack of domination....next step would be to go 'all the way' with Danielle... Since he has an 8"er, how about putting in a sanitary pad to 'hide' his manhood and taking him out en femme.... I like the potential of both being fucked side by side by two men... can hardly wait for Ch. 2

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
My Hearts Desire too

Cherysse, this is such a wonderful start to a fantastic journey, it certainly is my Hearts Desire. It is so realistic there are no steps I can't equate with it happening to me and you just can't wait for the next installment.

Colleen

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Works well writen

A very well writen and thought out story. One of the most enjoyable things I have read in a very long time.

Please write more.

A

msboy8msboy8almost 19 years ago
Hot Start to a hot series

You not only look at the sex, you also visit the emotions. That's what makes for an incredible read!

Tommie136Tommie136over 16 years ago
Excellent

Throughly entertaining. One of the best I've read on the web. You are to be commended for writing a very entertaining story. Do please continue. Sincerely, Tommie Bridges

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
It should have been me!

I just wish my wife had been as understanding of my true feelings of wishing to be a woman.

tobytimtobytimalmost 13 years ago

So far ths is great.

This was one of my fantasies years ago,, I am enjoying this immensley

julesbabejulesbabeover 12 years ago
Fantastic begining

Great beginning - hope the rest is as good

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Desires

Darkest desires discovered by his understanding wife, from Danny to Danielle, this is incredibly hot.

DeborahAnneDeborahAnneabout 12 years ago
Very good start

I hope this continues and I can see that there are more chapters, this first one is very good and I understand exactly as I am a crossdresser and when I make love to the wife while wearing a nightgown I have exceptional ejaculations. I will be reading the other chapters soon. da.cd@frontier.com

pammycakes13pammycakes13over 11 years ago

just plain wonderful!!!..

..great writing & story!!.......

......i just love it!!! xo

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
On the edge!

This is going great, so far; I'm anxious to see who Danielle matures as!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
nice

so far this is great , lets keep it going. i like to dress as well

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
My Heart's Desire

Oh my God is this good.

More. . .pretty please?

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
please please please tell more

Oh I would may handsomley for a wife like you. Your understanding of what men want is second to none.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Keep going you know this is a great story

Show him/ her the.ropes baby

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Oh please bring a man home to use him while you watch

I love this story, please ensure he gets used like the dirty little whore he obviously is :)

scottslaughterscottslaughteralmost 9 years ago
Whatever Your Heart Desires (01)

I certainly enjoyed this first chapter and look forward to the remaining chapters.

Tootight1Tootight1about 7 years ago
good story

Nice, very nice. So many things to talk about, where would, or should I begin? In the beginning, the only reason she married him was because she didn't want to lose him to another woman, wrong reason. Yes, she realized she loved him later. She told him she would fuck other guys after they got married, and she did. So much for her idea of marriage, or how much she loved him. Yes, she saw the hurt in his eyes, so?

How she came up with info, and put it into play was nicely done. She didn't tell him she was into his sites on the computer, and that's how she came up with all of what happened. Communication seems to be Zero, and that could be the fly in the ointment. I hope not. Is there a difference between pillow talk and real life, you bet. Ask any married woman.

usmclassusmclassabout 6 years ago
More!

I want to see it play out like her "test" fantasy. Wow. And the fact they obviously love each other only makes it better.

Julia2017CJulia2017Calmost 6 years ago
My fantasy

I read this entire series years ago. Re-reading it reminds of well written it is and how jealous I am of Danielle.

Tootight1Tootight1over 4 years ago
good story

I am a firm believer in having no real secrets between hubby and wife, and something like this should be approached if not before marriage, then immediately after. You or anyone else should not waste the meager life we have and not be able to do the things we want. Some things are unobtainable, we understand but most are obtainable.

I can understand his reluctance here, but he should have vocalized at some point. She would still go for a strange fuck, at the drop of a hat, and if she thought he was anything less than what she preserved, she would be gone.

I loved this story, as it being almost real, and believable. thanks

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Please go on!

Just love this start. Wish you were my wife when she found out. She left after 16years. I have come out as Charlene but do not have a mate yet. I am looking forward to Daaniell's full coming out!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

one word - Beautiful!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

It's unfinished

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Anyone that's trans I am a vd9 recently and I have never been there fuckef with a real cock.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I'm in Shrewsbury Mass please come fill me with a real cock and I will be yours anytime you want to if you cum in my ass and DP too with a real life 4 some two in my ass wanting my mouth and one I jerk off so you can come on my face 4135071053

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Fuck me as I am fucking my girlfriend at the same time

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