All Comments on 'Devour me'

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My Erotic TailMy Erotic Tailover 19 years ago
Honey~

(1) your a poet...I didn't know it.

(2) Devour me was tantalizing and scrumptious...

(3) I liked your poem, endearing and poetic.

BelegonBelegonover 19 years ago
Mon Ami...

I love it. It just feels so right. Especially the part about eyes. Why do I have to lose all sense of time or decorum in those damn eyes?

Edward TeachEdward Teachover 19 years ago
WOW...Honey does it again!!

When only steps

separate us,

and a second

may be too long.

I know that feeling. Yep, I definately know that feeling and Honey captured it perfectly with only a few words.

gotwood49gotwood49over 19 years ago
And I would, gladly...

Very nice, honey.

Very erotic, and very romantic.

Your eyes, tho,

would be the ones, I think,

who take captives.

Capture me sometime!

impressiveimpressiveover 19 years ago
Oh, yeah!

Been there. You captured so much, so eloquently. Well done! ~Imp

sacksackover 18 years ago
superb!

I will be sure to read it again and again!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Sizzling

So so hot an lingering...

BlackSnakeBlackSnakeover 18 years ago
Hot

Incredibly hot and tempting....

Bill DadaBill Dadaover 18 years ago
Sizzlin'

Loved 'held captive by your eyes' & 'a second may be too long'...everything in between was great, but the opening grabbed my attention and the end slapped me upside my head demanding I not forget what I just read. With men it is sometimes neccesary to take extreme measures.

TY, BD

~photoguy~~photoguy~over 18 years ago
yumm

very erotic imagery .. YESSS

AbsolutAbsolutabout 17 years ago
I wish

I wish someone felt for me like that. Again, I really liked this one.

rick_soldierrick_soldierover 14 years ago
Very nice

Very sensual, erotic poetry.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Very good

Honey, your poems are very good...they touch you inside like any good book or poem. I was very impressed with your writing...Haven't read any of your stories, but if they are as good...wow.

Sincerely

ncman_01@yahoo.com

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
very nice

when i'm turned into liquid, a pool of desire!! well said..

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