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by Anonymous

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by My Erotic Tail10/21/04

Honey~

(1) your a poet...I didn't know it.
(2) Devour me was tantalizing and scrumptious...
(3) I liked your poem, endearing and poetic.

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by Belegon10/22/04

Mon Ami...

I love it. It just feels so right. Especially the part about eyes. Why do I have to lose all sense of time or decorum in those damn eyes?

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by Edward Teach10/22/04

WOW...Honey does it again!!

When only steps
separate us,
and a second
may be too long.

I know that feeling. Yep, I definately know that feeling and Honey captured it perfectly with only a few words.

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by gotwood4910/24/04

And I would, gladly...

Very nice, honey.
Very erotic, and very romantic.
Your eyes, tho,
would be the ones, I think,
who take captives.
Capture me sometime!

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by impressive11/01/04

Oh, yeah!

Been there. You captured so much, so eloquently. Well done! ~Imp

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by templeminded11/02/04

great

great poem

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by sack08/17/05

superb!

I will be sure to read it again and again!

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by Anonymous08/18/05

Sizzling

So so hot an lingering...

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by BlackSnake08/18/05

Hot

Incredibly hot and tempting....

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by Bill Dada08/27/05

Sizzlin'

Loved 'held captive by your eyes' & 'a second may be too long'...everything in between was great, but the opening grabbed my attention and the end slapped me upside my head demanding I not forget what I just read. With men it is sometimes neccesary to take extreme measures.
TY, BD

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by ~photoguy~11/20/05

yumm

very erotic imagery .. YESSS

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by Absolut02/22/07

I wish

I wish someone felt for me like that. Again, I really liked this one.

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by rick_soldier10/23/09

Very nice

Very sensual, erotic poetry.

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by Anonymous03/10/12

Very good

Honey, your poems are very good...they touch you inside like any good book or poem. I was very impressed with your writing...Haven't read any of your stories, but if they are as good...wow.
Sincerely
ncman_01@yahoo.com

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