All Comments on 'Wind Journey'

by Belegon

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jd4georgejd4georgeover 19 years ago
I mean this as a compliment:

Can you imagine the wonderful greeting card this could be? And the possibilities of illustrated poetry...

If that cheek you wrote of didn't blush, then they didn't deserve this poem.

ReltneReltneover 19 years ago
****

It could be tightened a little, but the images and emotion are strong and the ending is very good.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
I love this!

It's my kind of poem. Beautiful, quite apart from the sentiment.

LadyJeanneLadyJeanneabout 19 years ago
Incredibly

romantic! I love the cadence and the style, and the touching sentiment behind it really warmed me. Beautifully done! Thank you. LJ

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