Swipe to see who's online now!
- Non-Erotic Poetry
- poetic dance
- Comments
All Comments on 'poetic dance'
by cavu182
Sort by:
- 1 Comment
DanaQtover 19 years agoThis wasn't bad but...
The flow of the poem needs to be worked on. Also, the punctuation. Prehaps counting syllables might help you. Good luck with everything.
Sincerely, Dana
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Swipe to see more cams!
