All Comments on 'On the Subway'

That was the shortest, hottest story I have ever read. Despite how short the story is I orgasmed so hard because of how well written the story is. Great erotic situation!

I had a bit of a problem getting into this character because of the location. His verbalization of the events are top notch, though. Love the balance between pain and enjoyment thing. What's with the other passengers not knowing what was going on?

That story gave me the quickest orgasm of my life!! Wow!

This has been my fantasy for ages! I can actually sit on the subway and make myself cum just thinking of some stranger fucking me while others don't know what's going on. I am still dripping wet from reading this and will use these visuals to cum with my vibrator later