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God Bless You, Marianne Duquesne

byFrederick Carol©
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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous10/24/04

I do hope this story wins!

I do love a good romance, and this one is exquisite!
I know the pain of losing a dear love, and I just wish there'd been a Mariane Duquesne in my life. Too late now, but I can still dream about it.

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by sack10/25/04

Improbable, but you made it work...

This could have been awkward in the wrong hands....that just shows what a great writer you are! Good luck with the contest!

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by Anonymous10/26/04

Sweet!

What a lovely Halloween treat!

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by Rumple Foreskin10/27/04

Nicely Done

That was a well-done little tale with a nice twist. Good work.

Rumple

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by Boxlicker10110/27/04

Sweet and romantic

This was a very sweet, very romantic story. I found myself also saying "God bless you, Marianne Duquesne." Although I write mostly pure smut (impure smut to some) I like a romantic story like this also.

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by Black Tulip10/28/04

Lovely

I enjoyed reading your story.
It is a lovely romantic tale.

Good luck.

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by jakk10/30/04

fun

sexy and sweet and just the right flow to make for a great read. "jakk"

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by jakk10/30/04

oh yeah

and another part would be great if you chose to write one."jakk"

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by Namizujs01/31/05

Do continue with it if you can, please...

The title says it all.
I loved it.

John

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by YornH04/16/10

Not very deep....

but very nice nevertheless - It would be nice to believe this could happen in real life.
A nice, mild and lovely story and very romantic. I just wished there would be more character development but just the thought that this could actually happen, makes for a nice. wishful story.
Thank you - keep them coming.

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by PanicByNumbers09/02/10

Nice

Thought it was cute and it even made me tear up a little bit. Short and sweet, tender.

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by ChucksSite12/10/11

I Believe This Was The Best Of The Stories ....

that I have read from Frederick. It has the tender romance and yet the sultry and exotic flare that makes his stories readable and lovable. And, I have a special Marianne as well which makes it all the better. Thanks.

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