All Comments on 'Musing immortal'

give up on hope and birds and color and all that wonderful stuff!! somehow this is sort of Poe-esque in its initial feeling, despondant, hopeless, I like the ending, very good :)

....you end on a hopeful note. Look up, there IS still time.

I hope you're feeling better now. :-)

PS a five.

Enjoyed this somewhat cynical write with real life images and I like how you ended on positive note.

and like Tess, I'm glad you ended this hopefully. It's very observant and insightful--but stay away from the Chef Boyardee--it's full of preservatives. :D

If you’re unpopular- a loner.

Endless nights of solitaire- endless nights writing.

on the computer- damn those addicting things!

Smoking cigarettes- 2 packs a day.

Without care or concern of lung cancer- but but, I do.

But maybe a smoker’s cough- damn cough keeps me up.

Shoot me now!