All Comments on 'down by the lake'

One can't help but wonder if this was wishful thinking or an expansion of a fleeting memory? Very enjoyable and eroticly humorous, Poetry. (*_*)

But I think it would have done better written as a story. In my opinion, it wasn't for poetry.

You were very descriptive and this I loved. I could vision everything. Without that, this would've been nothing. You're fabulous with your words but like I said, it would've done better as a story.

Never to hurt and only to help.

Sincerely, Dana

I see 'pubic hair' became 'public hair...' -- gotta watch that -- or perhaps a Freudian slip? .oops.