All Comments on 'Her Heart'

This one really touch me...again your words are so powerful

Definitely and enjoyable read. I have read a lot today and came across a lot of poetry that seemed to be more of a story than REAL poetry. This was beautifully written but there were slight problems with the meter causing the flow to be a little rocky. It's more near the middle and ending.

Also, you may want to fix the extra spacing between the stanzas.

Never to hurt and only to help.

Thanks for the great read, Dana

this is a very good poem. it's not like i write, but is very good for the style of poem you wrote.

A wonderful written poem with your words of tenderness.

It's an exceptional poem touching one's heart and emotions.

Absolutely touching. It is a wonderful poem that reaches the depths of one's heart.

loved it arto