by cavu182
EROTIC! I absolutely loved this!
It was so greatly detailed that I wanted to give a 5 just for that. But some of the grammer and punctuation needs to be worked on- just a tad.
Never to hurt and only to help.
Thanks for the sexy read, Dana
I won't make my usual tedious poetry suggestions. Yes, I see spots that need editing, but since it turned me on, I don't feel like discussing line breaks and such.
.....the speed an intensity of a one off casual coupling.