All Comments on 'after a long airplane night'

EROTIC! I absolutely loved this!

It was so greatly detailed that I wanted to give a 5 just for that. But some of the grammer and punctuation needs to be worked on- just a tad.

Never to hurt and only to help.

Thanks for the sexy read, Dana

I won't make my usual tedious poetry suggestions. Yes, I see spots that need editing, but since it turned me on, I don't feel like discussing line breaks and such.

.....the speed an intensity of a one off casual coupling.