All Comments on 'Vera's Comeback'

It Was Great, But It Should've Been A Little Longer. The Car Bang Should've Been A Little More Longer And Freakier.

The story was well written the introduction could've included the prelude to the gangbang by showing the flirtations between characters prior to the actual assault. The initial account as presented could very well measured up to rape.or non-concentual sex. The eroticism of this account outside the bounds of normal social and legal behavior blows the roof off. The rythym of unfolding the scenes was smooth and timely.

Although I personally experienced similar circumstances the female seemed just as unwilling til the action began then again when the action stopped. The measure of this psychological drama was touched with great skill and effectiveness by the author. Thanks for a great read!