by julieshining
I really enjoyed this! It's left me 'excited' and wanting more---please write more!
AS someone who loves the female orgasm as much as I do - you painted wonderful images, & "left the door open" for more.
this story was poorly written and lacked real life descriptions. It was tooooooooo much on the ordinary side
you sick perv you think by changeing the age no one would notice you where talking about someone under age
It was pretty good. You rush through some stuff, and for some reason you don't feel that her hair color, or any other details would be important, but I can look past that to enjoy the quality of the writing. Thank you.
i have never laughed so hard in my life on this one! thanks to you i spewed coke on the screen! Seriously, what to do when you have your hand in a place where it should and should not be?
Wave with the other?
Great, great story
This sounds like a pervert spying on a little girl.. Even tho you said she is eighteen, you keep saying when she grows up.. She can buy her own porn if she's eighteen..
You guys have to note that in some states regardless of were this story took place put a 21 age limit on being able to purchase adult content....the author seems to hae allowed for this...in a way i dont think it makes her underage at all....in fact if she was why would her parents allow her to watch someone elses house?? Think beyond the sex guys and look at the other part of the story before jumping the gun.
to the Author---seemed rushed but well written otherwise.