All Comments on 'Older Secretary'

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Jay RichardsJay Richardsover 19 years ago
excellent, a fun read.

I am a new writer. I enjoyed your story and your writing skill.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Nice...

I enjoyed it a great deal, but found myself wishing there was more erotic buildup/foreplay...building slowly, hotly into the actual intercourse. Just one guy's opinion.

Dan

amoroneamoroneover 10 years ago
Lovely story

Well written and believable.

Thanks.

Anonymous
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