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by Phrenetic_Ice

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Excellent

This was beautiful. I only wish it were me that was there.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Wonderful

As a female, I have never heard words so wonderfully describe the experience of making love. Your story was a delight to read. Thank you.

Bigboy63841Bigboy63841over 19 years ago
Literary Genius

Phrenetic_Ice is probably one of the most skillful writers I have enjoyed here at Literotica so far. I would almost compare his style to a younger --and unusually passionate-- Philip Roth, although the boundaries to overkill are brushed from time to time. I especially liked the introduction part of the piece and would recommend it to anyone, who enjoys erotic writing that goes beyond harsh and dry descriptions of ever the same sex scenes.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
wow

this was great

SinequanonSinequanonalmost 19 years ago
man o man

Very,very nice. Anticipation and ultimate agression all in one package. <sigh>

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Hot ending!

Beginning drags. End is good

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Better than sex

Maybe it's a bit sad to say 'better than sex'. It WAS a bit too flowery maybe, but then I could be a philistine. It reminds me of my first time, and the feeling that sex can be life changing if only for a few minutes :)

I didn't come reading it, but sometimes that's no bad thing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Great Writing

Much better than most of the stuff posted on Literotica!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
nice

Mmm..love and animalistic urges all in one. Nice.

Angelwings7Angelwings7about 18 years ago
Very good.....made me want to find someone....

I wanted to find someone who could make me feel just what Noel was describing so aptly. I do know just the guy and he can be just about as loving. So the story made me ache for him. A very nice ache indeed! Thanks Noel, I really enjoyed the story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Huu,,,, Very well put

Very nice.

Will make one sit and have a few things to think about for a while

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Nicely done

Flowery but a very nice change of pace on this site. I enjoyed the vocabulary and imagery, strange to think I'd say that on an erotica site:) Over all, Well Done!

ksummerksummerover 17 years ago
panting softly

you really ought to consider getting this published.

the eloquence with which you portray sexual power in all it's flurry of incongruities is utterly overt, necessary even.

I'm glad somebody did it. you did it, kind sir

you slowly, deliberately stoked the fire, until you set me ablaze

I'm glad I ran across this site, and clicked on most attractive of the titles. when I got to your narrative I was immediately and absolutely capitvated

you've dazzled and tantalised with your acuity, your tongue, your hands, and with the vital heat

thank you thank you thank you

--K

correspondence is not expected, but would be welcomed

BrandiiBrandiiover 17 years ago
Educated and sexy.... what a combination

Unbelievable.

I can come up with nothing that will adequately express exactly what it is that I am feeling at this present time; or the degree of pleasure I received reading your literary submission.Good Lord!

Unfortunately, I also know it's not real [despite your inference that it was for all women on the planet]and know I am never going to find a man south of the equator who will talk to me like that.

She is one lucky girl.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Reminder..

Amazing. It reminded me of what true love making can be like... not just sex. Thank you. Thank you for this story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Hold On....I'm trying to catch my breath!

This story was BEATUIFUL!!!

please please please publish a story about love-making, not sex, but LOVE-MAKING!!!

Or write a book teaching males how to express such levels of appreciation and satisfaction!

one more thing..... THANK YOU, THANK You, THANK You!

<3

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
I just found his website...

OMG his stuff is so hot and I just found his website. It's under a different name he used sometimes but I know it's him. The site is http://www.geocities.com/worldofpeter_pan/index.html and has a bunch of his stuff plus other fun links!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
WOW......amazing

This is such a true portrayal of what love-fueled sex is like, amazing, thank you, thank you, thank you, please write more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
WTF!

"Sitting there, you can hardly believe the moisture that is gathering in the main assembly area."

Are you kidding me...in the main assembly area?

I was not sure if this was an erotic story or one person's attempt to display his superior vocabulary. Either way, pomposity is never erotic, unless one deems his own words somehow intoxicating! Sad, very sad...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Totally Engrossing!

Got goosebumps at the best spots.

This is a very literate, but appropriate passage. It was

enjoyable reading in itself, as well as gently portraying the pleasure of sex.

The descriptions are on the verge of beautiful poetry, and

I'm not a big fan of poems.

It was good to also see the positive feedback from other

readers. ...Thankyou, it was a bright spot in my day!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Except for "main assembly area" it was lovely

"main assembly area" That comment was a bit of a turn off. Women are not machinery or a factory job. However the rest was very lovely. I miss sex but I really miss lovemaking. This article made me remember that.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Yum. Talent is so sexy.

That was wonderful. I beg to differ with other comments re. "main assembly area". Juxtaposed with your other beautiful imagery, I took it as a reference to the idea that it is the MAIN assembly area- we are all assembled there! In other words, I thought it was a wonderful injection of humor and reverence for the the womb. Finally, erotica for the literate woman! Is there truly a man out there who can talk like that and make great love? Some of us are more turned on by words than by anything... Thanks again, love.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Yum. Talent is so sexy.

That was wonderful. I beg to differ with other comments re. "main assembly area". Juxtaposed with your other beautiful imagery, I took it as a reference to the idea that it is the MAIN assembly area- we are all assembled there! In other words, I thought it was a wonderful injection of humor and reverence for the the womb. Finally, erotica for the literate woman! Is there truly a man out there who can talk like that and make great love? Some of us are more turned on by words than by anything... Thanks again, love.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Wonderful story

but, (apart from the great description of love making),the phrase that got to me was "in her room of faded dreams and hopes".

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Love elevates sex

into something sublime. Lovely.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Ultimate Perfecion

This touched on what is the often ignored emotional side of sex. You can give your sexuality physically but it takes so much more to give it up emotionally. Being vulnerable but at the same time feeling comfortable and in control. That only comes from a trust with your partner. This story brought tears to my eyes with its beautiful sometimes poetic descriptions. We are so desensitised to sex through movies and tv we forget that what it is at its core is a love shared by two individuals. This story made me look at my body in a whole new light. Beautiful

AnavywifeAnavywifeover 16 years ago
wow!

i have never been a woman to come very easily if at all. This is not to say that i have been deprived of GREAT sex. I am married with 2 children...but damn this was amazing, i must say that i am lucky enough to have a husband who treats me with much the same respect and gentalness that is depicted in this...at least more often than not, although we do give in to our animalistic urges now and a again. anyway i loved this even with the Main gathering area line...only because so many times that is all it seams to be, that is where everything my cum his cum saliva.... thats where it all eventually ends up!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
"Event horizon" ??

struggled through it until then .......

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
wow

sublime and beautfiul

incrementalincrementalabout 15 years ago
Wonderful

I loved the tone of the piece. The first section, reflecting on the crude aspect of sex and had me laughing.

The clever, witty tone continued and my favorite paragraph might've been the "event horizon" one, the descriptions of geometry were so unusual but done so well they were intensely sweet. The entire piece was just so fantastically attentive (which it proposed itself to be in the beginning) that it couldn't help but be wonderful. 5 stars.

The only part I had problems with was the "Patting your bottom merely" paragraph, and that was only because of its length. I liked the reflection on the treasured gift, I thought it was a worthwile diversion. However the paragraph ran long, visually, and I think it could've been seperated into a second one starting with "Ages and continents apart". The length would've been easier to digest and the content would've been more properly grouped, with a nice transition in "In fact, my mind".

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
hmmmm.....

Maybe I'm just weird but even though im a female i found this boring and not straight enough to the point i prefer less intelligent language and more action but to each their own i guess and it was well written even if it didn't make me feel anything. Good Job

MidnightBlueMoonMidnightBlueMoonabout 15 years ago
*thinks*

i think you are obviously a very intellegent man and that is a turn on but i didnt understand some of it but it was a turn on all the same...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
did nothing for me

Intelligence is a turnon - but at the same time, the tone felt a little more self-important than sexy. I'm glad some people seemed to enjoy it, despite the excessive use of exclaimation points and incongruous diction.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Your artistry with words...

Your artistry with words in this piece, as usual, proves your rightful position as the master of erotic writing that everything you post shows you to be. Although this essay was shorter than I, personally, wish it would have been, the depth and breadth of emotion and passion contained in it was, as always, highly stimulating and satisfying. Even though many of us men may feel what you feel, you have the unique gift which enables you to distill it down to a verbal essence which loses little in the process of being transferred to the page. I have discussed your work with a number of women ranging in age from fourteen to eighty-five, all of whom have great difficulty reading your works without feeling that you are speaking intimately to them, personally. What a gift!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Out Of Touch

Dude, You Are So Full Of Yourself! While We Do Desire A Modicum Of Communication, It Should Not Take The Form That You Present. What A Turn-off Listening To Your Endless Babbling And Distracting Reminiscences.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
whoa...

I was enjoying it until it got to being told to lay down belly-down... your careful phrasing took me right back to a rather beautiful memory, and for that I thank you :)

I guess this story isn't for everyone... but to be made love to and adored is the innermost desire of this tomboy, anyway!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Evocative

It was beautifully written, proving beyond all doubt that an elegant turn of phrase can be so arousing - this then, is the difference between 'erotica' and pornography.

Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Incredible

Humorous, artistically crafted, and soo titillating. This is the work of a genius. The words caressed me like a man's hands...

kittykitty47kittykitty47about 14 years ago
Touche

Right now, I'm grateful you're straight.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
pfffff

Pretentious, silly, and more than a little sexist.

I'm (unfortunately) female, and do not enjoy being made "vulnerable", being "fucked verbally", or reading such drivel. Currently, this piece of writing is being ridiculed on WeepingCock(Livejournal comm) and it made me laugh more than once.

But, hey, some of the people who commented quite liked your blathering ramble, so whatever floats your boat.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago

I thoroughly enjoyed your appreciation of the woman's body. Whoever she is, its pretty apparent that you indeed do love her. I envy that woman.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Beautiful wordplay

---and so much more erotic. This is 'fuck me verbally'. This is making love verbally. Your lady is a lucky woman.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
"A" is for Awesome!

Yep, simply the best on Literotica that I have read so far. Actually, the first time I opened this story page and saw the words "Fuck me verbally, Noel", I felt disgusted as I usually do when I see that outright vulgar word that holds nothing sensual or erotic in it. I had closed the page without bothering to read on.

But I was still looking for something sensually passionate. And I happened to come by this story again and this time I let my eyes scan the page a little beyond that first line, "Fuck me verbally, Noel". And I soon realized that this story was not bad at all. In fact, this is an excellent piece of work.

roguevixenroguevixenover 13 years ago
best damned verbal seduction ever.

love this story!! There are few men capable of verbal seduction like this. very few. This is something worth saving in an anthology, worth bookmarking and reading again and again.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
a meeting of the minds

!!!!! pleasingly, surprisingly, refreshing !!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
wow

Wow that was beautiful...I just loved the way you used the words. It excited something in me beyond sexual arousal. :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
mature

mature, simply mature and also encouraging

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Well done

Very nice.

SharleanSharleanabout 13 years ago
You got my attention

and the rest is history...excellent story and you have a wonderful sense of humor...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Beautiful

This is, quite possibly, one of the most beautiful things I have read. After I finished reading, I sat there and sobbed for a while, because it brought back so many memories. Thank you for sharing this with us. It is wonderful.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
just wow

I have been looking for this story again and oh my. Literally one of my favorite reads

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Former journalist, truck-driver, actor, salesman, firefighter, marketing manager, teacher, author - currently publisher of business cd-roms, my life's resume is covered in the fully dysfunctional autobiography &quot;Cool Among The Flames,&quot; (Amazon) https://www.amazon.com...