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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Longing...

Longing and in love. A lovely combination of the two. Unattainable desires, unhealthy attitudes, obssesions, unrequited love... Ahhh... how the heart flutters when it meets its match. How it fancy's just a kiss. Beautiful. I love the strange lingering warmth she felt on her lips, that was bestowed by her dangerous, but oh so human, admirer. And hopefully soon-to-be- lover. Have her approach him already! Please... It's every virgin's, (especially a girl's), wish, (including lil' ol'e sweet girly me), to have a secret admirer. Especially a vampire. Wonderful Story!!!!!

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