All Comments on 'Black Peter Came Too'

Lovely gentle story. let's have more please.

The sex is a little abrupt and the ending a bit flat, but otherwise pretty amazing! Good luck with the contest!

... Black Peter? I want one! ~Imp

Very hot little piece of work Tulip.

Good job of making something as mundane as Christmas the base of a very hot story.

Now I want a 'Black Peter' too. I've been a good girl this year, I deserve one. :) Good luck!

I'm not sure why, but NICE seems like such an appropriate word to describe your story. A nice, well-written, enjoyable, even informative, seasonal story. Good luck.

Rumple

wonderful write black~

Informative, erotic, pleasantly cute and well written~

Happy Holidays and good luck (*_~)

loved the background and all. all the best with the contest.

That was lovely, BT, and so nice to see the different culture and traditions. Points for originality ... and the hot sex doesn't hurt either! ;)

I especially enjoyed your use of the different culture’s traditions as an integral part of the suitor’s attempt to court his beloved

You have a beautiful attention to detail that I enjoyed in this story and have enjoyed in another.

Nice to read a little romance. Gives a little hope for this time of the year! Thanks for the story.

A lovely balance of passion and sweetness!

A lovely little story!

Most all you female writers give my cock a jolt. I'm old, 76 in fact, but never forget that woman (with her pussy) is the best thing God ever made.

I get as much as I can from my wife. The rest of my need is self-fulfilled. Do you have a man in your life? Would you care to carry on an online correspondence? I'd love to know more about that horny mind of yours.

Bob