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All Comments on 'Pendulum of passion'

by My Erotic Tail

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AnnoraAnnoraover 19 years ago
Spectacular

Wow factor in this poem!

LilDarlinLilDarlinover 19 years ago
Sizzles~~!!!

Wow is the word. This was a hot, fast, ride. Great imagery and the flow..well it slid right off the page..Sizzles I say~~!!!

Christina O. LeighChristina O. Leighover 19 years ago
......

I think I'm breathing again :)

Great job!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Art! I'm breathless!

Every word inspires an erotic vision of a burning passion that would leave the sheets in cinders, if not for sweat and orgasmic release! Amazing job! Well-Done~! :) ~Rain

~hellbaby~~hellbaby~about 19 years ago
Whoa

This poem got my heart racing!I love it. Thanks

~hellbaby~~hellbaby~over 18 years ago
~Wiping sweat from brow~

Whoa, what an intensely vivid scene you captured, I heard the smack!!

The title drew me in,I'm glad it did,Thanks

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