All Comments on 'Daddy's First Experience'

too short hence too crude

It was great very hot.

"Daddy, that was the first time I have ever orgasmed."

"I would go to my room and masturbate thinking about what you were doing to her."

which is it?

not a bad story, but almost a clone of about 500 daddy/daughter stories on literotica

Just because she used to masturbate, doesn't mean she had an orgasm.

Less credible is the way she expresses herself in view of her inexperience.

Learn to use it

Keep writing, but take your time, flesh out the story. If you write like you fuck, your a minute and a half man. Don't let negative criticism get you down. Keep writing but take the constructive criticism and use it to become a better writer.

I compalled to do masturbation,not nice.

This reminds me of my first time with my girl as a matter of fact I'm going to go fuck her right now!! ((_)====>()

Mmmm...I can't wait to fuck my daddy like that. Very sexy...I wish it was a little longer though.

can we say hot! made me cum just by reading it.

often i have fantasized of daddy fucking me like uncle john did but he is so sweet i think he is too scared I may have to take it from his huge beautiful cock

Very hot but make it longer. We need chapter 2

chapter two please and chapter three. i'd love to see this progress to daddy being in command and forceful

This story made me so wet. I'm still a teenager and Virgin so it made me imagine hat it would like to do it.

We need to see more of this story line. Don't stop now!!!

pathetic. written by a child

There's a thousand stories here that are the same as this misinformed nonsense.

This should be a series about their developing relationship and her sexual awakening. An exploration of her sexual preferences with daddy and others. This should culminate in her desire to have daddy's baby.

Get a proofreader.

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