All Comments on 'Stand Out'

clever writings~

"...Huddling humanity..."

Very witty ...a word wizards poem!

Another great poem. Wonderful word choice. A few errors I can see which probably were missed when you posted.

I really don’t means to pout- I don't think you wanted "means" here.

Discover yourself. Be nobody else- comma would be good between these two lines.

No harm meant.

Christina

Look inside to where all hides

And there is all you need

Discover yourself. Be nobody else

And then you can finally be free~

I just love these lines~~!!

So much depth and emotion. Your imagery here shines thru. The poem as a whole tells so much, and yet not enough.

I see the story inside the poem, and it feeds the soul. Just wonderful . More please~~!!

Another good poem. A positive theme to "be yourself" and to "stand out". Enjoyed the poem. A few syntax errors that could be attributed to typos. Please submit more. Enjoy your musings.