What can be more erotic that knowing the way a woman masturbates. Green Gem has written this so explicitly that I could see it vividly and almost smell it. Some personal relief is required now. Thank you.
Green Gem has again proven that no one can heat up the printed page the way she does. giving this a 5 rating is so inadequate;it's easily a 10.
What a wonderfully lurid short story; just a little monday morning office fun. i loved it.
thank you so much, darling.
I'm NEVER disappointed by Green Gem. Each new story exceeds my eager expectations - riveting, sensual and rivingly erotic!!!
In my opinion one of the best story tellers at Literotica
...is why you are one of my favourite writers on here.
Superbly done - a dizzy combination of pacing, heat, intimate detail and simmering passion. Quite possibly your best yet!
Very nice... Sexy, VERY believable content and nicely written. Makes me wish I was him for some reason...
Everything Green Gem touches turns to gold. Literotica is lucky to have an author of this caliber in its ranks!
...that a "5" is the highest vote one can give. Once more, Green Gem has proven herself to be the master (mistress?) of erotic writing! She made me feel as if I were there (what an ultimate thrill THAT would be!), enjoying the sight, sound, smell and taste of her. There is absolutely no one on the web who can express themself better, with such originality as well as total sensuality! I have never read or imagined such a totally erotic visualization of the ultimate woman masturbating! It is a masterpiece of erotica! Green Gem is my favorite author by far (not to mention fantasy object)! Highest praises and kudos to her! (If only I could meet her!)
What can I say thats not been already,
Its simply the best like you Green Gem!
...one HOT story! You are the best, J, absolutely the best! Now...stay right there at your desk, I'll be right over! Hold that thought... *G*
Have a wonderful day, take care!
Great story. There is nothing more exciting to me than watching a woman masturbate. You words were so real I could almost see it and hear it.
Always loved your work but first time I commented. Keep it and us up....
I think I will be reading more of your work after this. Why I haven't read any of your work before is beyond me...simply amazing!
Green Gem has the amazing ability, to excite me with her written words. She must be the sexiest woman alive! This story made me not only feel I was there watching, but that I could feel what her body was feeling as well, and I know I could feel my own body responding!
Green Gem arouses me like no other woman ever has, she seems to know my every fantasy.
I think it's a rare author who can make people feel as much with their words as Green Gem is able to with hers!
Once again Green Gem is the best author here or anywhere, as well as one extremly sexy woman!
Thanks again Green Gem!
I must wank now. Excuse me, please.
Green Gem is just the best author on Lit, and this is another example of her powerfully erotic writing. So real and believable, all the details so perfect. I could almost hear her heavy breathing...or was that me?
This has to be the best I've read on Lit in along time. Too bad 5 is the highest you can give. Keep up the excellent writing and look forward to many more stories.
Ultimately intense and hot. I enjoyed this story very much and picturing the real life movements and scenario only enhances the pleasure. This story was told wonderfully. This is a very nice image I'll hold onto for a long time and will wonder what the sexy female voice on the other end of any phone call may be doing. Thanks a lot. :)
I loved the image of her looking into the mirror at her own genitals. Excellent picture of her pussy.
There was something about this story that makes the reader believe that something very like this actually happened to the author.
this story is so vividly written that I felt that I was there with her and we were both masturbating. Gem, this is among the hottest I've read here. I wish I could give it a seven or an eight!!
A personal account?
Next office I work in, I'll make sure I try to peek in through the doors more often. I wonder how many other women in offices are generating their "personal accounts"...
Green Gem continues to write like an angel-- still hiding her literary light under a bushel.
Well, sonofagun -- I've never thought about enjoying anything about Monday morning so I guess I've missed a lot. The story was great as are many of your other stories. Thank you.
A very erotic glimpse of solo pleasure.
After sorting through several unimpressive stories I came across you and I am impressed! Thanks for the great writing!
This was perfect! Exactly what I was looking for!
Taking a break from tedious work myself, I came across this story - and, damn!
I absolutely loved the vivid descriptions - I was picturing it as I read, a sign that it's written as all erotica should ideally be! You make me want to start anal play of my own, ma'am.
Your writing is excellent - this is something I'll be passing on. In fact, it's excellent enough that I think I need to go and tend to myself, like other commenters here.
Favoriting this right away - or...after I'm done.
I was masturbating myself with a white vibrator as I read this. Bravo.
I literally masturbated to this.
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