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Paying for the Broken Promise Ch. 04

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous12/07/04

What's wrong with masturbation?

What's the deal with this bitch? She is sick, first for getting him to make such a stupid promise in the first place, and then punishing him for breaking it, as Nature had him do. If she can play with herself, why the hell can't he?

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by Anonymous12/07/04

ok

I know this is fantasy but I wonder if any man would stay with such a control freak. You do have some talent so why not write different stories.

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by fdkman12/07/04

I Agree

I agree with the poster below. You have some decent talent, unlike some others that write here. Please put your talent to work on a story with better subject matter.

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by Anonymous12/07/04

Response to reader comments

She's writing this for the women and a few sick men. After all no man worth a turdnik - wait - whats that you say - the author is a man!! No Way. How erotic she/he is??

Well that explains it - HUH?

Please use your talents more erotically so we can be entertained and not upset with this sick stuff. Think about it. Regards

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by Anonymous12/08/04

Good Story

Good Story Looking forward to next part.Cant wait to see how far she takes the teasing.

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by Anonymous04/21/07

Great Story

This is a great story -- very erotic, very sexy. Being forced to play with yourself in front of your wife is hot enough, but being pushed to the absolute edge and not being allowed to cum is incredibly hot. Anyone who has not experienced the joy of teasing and denial is really missing out.

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by Anonymous08/15/07

Good story!

Peter_, your stories about yourself and Lisa are great. The idiots who keep bashing you should quit trolling and comment on something more to their liking. Please write more!

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by Anonymous08/15/07

Is Sexism raising its ugly mug here?

In many of the BDSM stories I've read here and elsewhere, involving a male dom, it's fairly common for the dom to control when and if the sub can cum. So why the freak out when the roles are reversed?
It's not always the male who is the dom. If a female dom isn't your cup of tea, don't read the story.
Personally, I'm all for equal opportunity. As to why the guy stays and "puts up with it," why do female subs stick around and "put up with it"? My guess is that subs choose this role for their own reasons and get satisfaction out of it.

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by ValensGirl01/20/13

I liked it better before the threat of the cock cage....but ooh, I love the headgames she's playing with him. :D Awesome.

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