All Comments on 'An Empath's Detective'

by Alex the Cat

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LustyTexanLustyTexanover 19 years ago
Great

Great story, could have a little more realistic apparoach to police work.

Evil AlpacaEvil Alpacaover 19 years ago
Excellent story

Wait . . . what was that between sex scenes? Was that a plot?!? Yay! A little bit dramitized, but a lot of fun and a welcome sight. I would've liked to have seen the "Empath" portion explained a little more, but that wasn't enough to detract from the very high quality of the story.

Keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Pulled off the ESP aspect

It's very tough to write an ESP ability into a story without either having the character come out as a Super Hero(ine) or something ridiculously weak & almost ineffectual. The fact that it actually melded into the story was an added bonus, you also ignored the temptation of getting into the sex right away. Keep writing stories of this caliber & you'll have many a constant reader.

dreamcatcher7dreamcatcher7about 17 years ago
brilliant

i loved it, thankyou.

i am working my way through your stories and loving them to bits.

Twilight08Twilight08over 15 years ago
FANTASTIC!!!

I'm adding u to my favorites .Great job keep them flowing .The environment was well staged, the passion shared between the characters was simply breathtaking.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
4th story

wow, i am really starting to notice a pattern here. iv read the two halves one soul series, that vampire one, and this. its always a strawberry blond, and she always has a rather bashful personality, and she also always ends up with a beautiful guardian angel. i think its safe to assume that the strawberry blond woman is supposed to be you.

love the stories

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

great xena uber!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
amazing

simply amazing

ihatejanestreetihatejanestreetover 11 years ago

Just brilliant! Nuff said!

redsox04meredsox04meover 11 years ago

Always enjoy re-reading this story....good for the ages!

CherrypeachCherrypeachabout 11 years ago
All I can say is Damn!

Alex is my new Superhero! Fantastic read.

BahamaBahamaover 10 years ago
Damn !

That was an awesome read ! Please continue this

TigerT57TigerT57about 10 years ago
Great Story !

Great Story ! Hope you continue it ! How many cousins were there in that family?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Good story -one small problem

I liked this story a lot, and even though the character of Alex is a bit incredible, this reads a lot like a television movie script. I only had one real issue... at one point you stated that Alex shed 'crocodile tears' when she found Kerri was alive. Crocodile tears refer to fake tears, and I am certain that Alex's tears would have been genuine. Otherwise, a good read!

ValsheaValsheaover 9 years ago

Great story, loved the characters, loved the intensity.

thumper3463thumper3463about 9 years ago

Loved the story, but there's no way Alex became a detective after 5 years. My brother is a cop and it takes a bit longer. But hey, its fiction and I loved it. :)

rml65rml65almost 9 years ago
awesome!

Love this story and all the rest of your stories! would love to see more stories from you!!!!

QRD23QRD23over 7 years ago

Gets better Everytime!!!!!

vpettprovpettproover 7 years ago

Would love more of these two!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Talk about romance

Loved it was thrilling and sexy

IMZADI88IMZADI88over 3 years ago
Awesome!

Loved the empath spin. Bad ass cop! Great character connection. Hot, tender and a bit of drama thrown in too. Really great read.

foxyfowlerfoxyfowlerover 3 years ago
Brilliant

Alex the Cat this is a fantastic story and hope you will write more about these two lovers and what becomes of them and will they have children I have had to read this story a few times and each time I find something I missed last time thank you. xxxxxx

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Yet again I am blown away with one of your stories. They are wonderful and draw you in incredibly fast. I would love to have entire novels of these pairings, or a film series well anything really to continue the awesomeness.

FranziskaSissyFranziskaSissyover 2 years ago

You having a tendency for high blood pressure the lovers find for each other, while starting a kind of relationship ....... Hapy that all went smooth, ok 17 stitches are quite a good cut and for shure it hurts like hell ...... Hopefully your private RL is a bit on the "normal " side of life ...... Great telltale, fabulous

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

No!! I want to keep reading!

Roti8211Chanai643Roti8211Chanai64311 months ago

Another good story! I enjoyed it!

Only issue is the planks of wood? But I guess it is fiction so anything can happen!

I like your writing style, just really good reads!

Thank you!

UncertainTUncertainT2 months ago

Back after enjoying reading this great story again.

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