by Alex the Cat
Great story, could have a little more realistic apparoach to police work.
Wait . . . what was that between sex scenes? Was that a plot?!? Yay! A little bit dramitized, but a lot of fun and a welcome sight. I would've liked to have seen the "Empath" portion explained a little more, but that wasn't enough to detract from the very high quality of the story.
Keep it up!
It's very tough to write an ESP ability into a story without either having the character come out as a Super Hero(ine) or something ridiculously weak & almost ineffectual. The fact that it actually melded into the story was an added bonus, you also ignored the temptation of getting into the sex right away. Keep writing stories of this caliber & you'll have many a constant reader.
i loved it, thankyou.
i am working my way through your stories and loving them to bits.
I'm adding u to my favorites .Great job keep them flowing .The environment was well staged, the passion shared between the characters was simply breathtaking.
wow, i am really starting to notice a pattern here. iv read the two halves one soul series, that vampire one, and this. its always a strawberry blond, and she always has a rather bashful personality, and she also always ends up with a beautiful guardian angel. i think its safe to assume that the strawberry blond woman is supposed to be you.
love the stories
Great Story ! Hope you continue it ! How many cousins were there in that family?
I liked this story a lot, and even though the character of Alex is a bit incredible, this reads a lot like a television movie script. I only had one real issue... at one point you stated that Alex shed 'crocodile tears' when she found Kerri was alive. Crocodile tears refer to fake tears, and I am certain that Alex's tears would have been genuine. Otherwise, a good read!
Loved the story, but there's no way Alex became a detective after 5 years. My brother is a cop and it takes a bit longer. But hey, its fiction and I loved it. :)
Love this story and all the rest of your stories! would love to see more stories from you!!!!
Loved the empath spin. Bad ass cop! Great character connection. Hot, tender and a bit of drama thrown in too. Really great read.
Alex the Cat this is a fantastic story and hope you will write more about these two lovers and what becomes of them and will they have children I have had to read this story a few times and each time I find something I missed last time thank you. xxxxxx
Yet again I am blown away with one of your stories. They are wonderful and draw you in incredibly fast. I would love to have entire novels of these pairings, or a film series well anything really to continue the awesomeness.
You having a tendency for high blood pressure the lovers find for each other, while starting a kind of relationship ....... Hapy that all went smooth, ok 17 stitches are quite a good cut and for shure it hurts like hell ...... Hopefully your private RL is a bit on the "normal " side of life ...... Great telltale, fabulous
Another good story! I enjoyed it!
Only issue is the planks of wood? But I guess it is fiction so anything can happen!
I like your writing style, just really good reads!
Thank you!