All Comments on 'Family Threesome'

Very badly written. Must be a joke!!

go change your nappy

to the point - don't feel like we get to know the characters too well. Certainly not as bad as they were saying in other comments.

Keep it up.

Was this written by someone holding a pen for the first time?

Next time, run it by an editor. The story had a good line to it, but it was written by a third grader from prison!!

I liked the story. I and my wife (jamie's stepmother) have been fucking our 16 year old daughter for over a year now. She has learneed to take it up the ass as well as sucking me and her stepmother off.

Good story, a little rushed however. Other commenter, that's incestuous and wrong.

First off... you just go into fucking your slut of a daughter without ANY hesitation or second thought??? And the wife just walks in on her husband fucking her daughter and is perfectly ok with it??? No no no! If you want it to be realistic then show the daddy having conflicting thoughts and hints of guilt. And the mom wouldnt enjoy being cheated on, more less with her own daughter! This is the most unrealistic crap I've ever read. lol. Rethink...then rewrite! Cuz this isnt gonna do it for anybody.