All Comments on 'In a Jeep, With Dirty Hands'

You always have a story tell, DA, and one that is a facinating little glimpse on your real life. Nice, real nice—great content. Enjoyed.

you just described my husband and half the people he knows, to a T, damn!!! good job, at least its a job, heh ;)

Great to have you back, D.A.; we've missed your crazy verse around here!

This piece is an interesting combo of prose and poetry- I think the poetry works better. That last stanza could stand on its own.

part about snot on your cuffs reminds me of mending fences back home in the middle of winter, trying to hurry before the horses get out in the road, and having to sniffle every three seconds to keep from dripping all over. Nice job!

Five.