esp. the lines
He wondered how to have her heart
and still preserve her honor
he was torn between the age old choice
to pillage or protect
umm....looks like you two got carried away and had to dance for longer than 16 lines...i know, its fun to break the rules!
I'm still laughing! Excellent, TathMerengue!
Fabulous line! Excellent work, both. ~Imp
When I saw absinthe in the title, I knew you wrote this with tath. lol Very smooth read.
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